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| + | The timeline looks good overall! A few areas where I would like to see improvement: | ||
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| + | * More pre-start events: You mention that construction work began after "more than 40 years of studies." It would be good to have a few events describing these studies. The [[timeline of Bay Area Rapid Transit]] has a similar detailed unfolding of events prior to the start of BART. In addition, events describing what transportation options, and transportation-related controversies, existed in Delhi prior to this, might also help shed light (for instance, buses and autos were switched to CNG around 2000 or so I think, to reduce pollution). | ||
| + | * More of a sense of geography: It would be good to mention where in the city various stations and lines are. You do this sometimes; however, it would be good to do it more consistently. | ||
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| + | Maybe take another look at [[timeline of Bay Area Rapid Transit]] to get more ideas. | ||
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Revision as of 11:29, 1 April 2024
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Review by Vipul on 2024-04-01
General standalone evaluation comments
The timeline looks good overall! A few areas where I would like to see improvement:
- More pre-start events: You mention that construction work began after "more than 40 years of studies." It would be good to have a few events describing these studies. The timeline of Bay Area Rapid Transit has a similar detailed unfolding of events prior to the start of BART. In addition, events describing what transportation options, and transportation-related controversies, existed in Delhi prior to this, might also help shed light (for instance, buses and autos were switched to CNG around 2000 or so I think, to reduce pollution).
- More of a sense of geography: It would be good to mention where in the city various stations and lines are. You do this sometimes; however, it would be good to do it more consistently.
Maybe take another look at timeline of Bay Area Rapid Transit to get more ideas.
Line-by-line comments
- The Big picture references "federal government" but that term isn't used in India; "central government" is the term of choice there. It might be good to change that (you can parenthetically say federal to reduce confusion for users from other countries).
- The row for 2013 May 9 referencing the COVID-19 pandemic seems wrong; there was no COVID-19 pandemic at the time. Please check the date and the content of the row!
External verification
There are several other accidents that were noteworthy in connection with Delhi Metro. For instance:
