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There are several other accidents that were noteworthy in connection with Delhi Metro. For instance:
 
There are several other accidents that were noteworthy in connection with Delhi Metro. For instance:
  
* [https://www.theguardian.com/world/2009/jul/12/delhi-metro-bridge-collapse Five crushed to death (2009)]
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* [https://www.theguardian.com/world/2009/jul/12/delhi-metro-bridge-collapse Five crushed to death (2009)]
* [https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/city/delhi/1-dead-4-injured-delhi-metro-station-wall-collapse/articleshow/107536942.cms 1 dead, 4 injured due to station wall collapse (2024)]
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* [https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/city/delhi/1-dead-4-injured-delhi-metro-station-wall-collapse/articleshow/107536942.cms 1 dead, 4 injured due to station wall collapse (2024)]
  
 
== Other ==
 
== Other ==

Revision as of 20:31, 19 April 2024

Review by Vipul on 2024-04-01

General standalone evaluation comments

The timeline looks good overall! A few areas where I would like to see improvement:

  • More pre-start events: You mention that construction work began after "more than 40 years of studies." It would be good to have a few events describing these studies. The timeline of Bay Area Rapid Transit has a similar detailed unfolding of events prior to the start of BART. In addition, events describing what transportation options, and transportation-related controversies, existed in Delhi prior to this, might also help shed light (for instance, buses and autos were switched to CNG around 2000 or so I think, to reduce pollution).
  • More of a sense of geography: It would be good to mention where in the city various stations and lines are. You do this sometimes; however, it would be good to do it more consistently.

Maybe take another look at timeline of Bay Area Rapid Transit to get more ideas.

Line-by-line comments

  • The Big picture references "federal government" but that term isn't used in India; "central government" is the term of choice there. It might be good to change that (you can parenthetically say federal to reduce confusion for users from other countries).
  • The row for 2013 May 9 referencing the COVID-19 pandemic seems wrong; there was no COVID-19 pandemic at the time. Please check the date and the content of the row!✔

External verification

There are several other accidents that were noteworthy in connection with Delhi Metro. For instance:

Other

visual data

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